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How far can you read before kicking your monitor to death?? http://www.gormglaith.com/pdf/gormglaith.pdf I love epublishing As always, a critique would be nice...

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    How far can you read before kicking your monitor to death??

    http://www.gormglaith.com/pdf/gormglaith.pdf

    I love epublishing

    As always, a critique would be nice

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    I got as far as "Thou didstn't"



    Life is too short.

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    Not much worse than HP Lovecraft though

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    Quote Originally Posted by demographic View Post
    Not much worse than HP Lovecraft though

    Oh it is. I'm waiting for Mad Ax to turn up to review it

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    Quote Originally Posted by moth View Post
    Oh it is. I'm waiting for Mad Ax to turn up to review it
    You got a wooden spoon in your hand there?

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    Quote Originally Posted by demographic View Post
    You got a wooden spoon in your hand there?


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    I gave up half way through The Dunwich Horror as it became too ridiculous.

    Happened upon The Grapes of Wrath which despite a slow 1st hundred pages, is awesome. Anyway...

    Is the link really that bad it's worth reading?

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    Quote Originally Posted by MyLittleStudPony View Post

    Is the link really that bad it's worth reading?
    Just read it, you fucking waster

    I reckon it's an AI author program gone bad b

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    Impressively bad. And not in a good way.

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    In the first paragraph I realised the translation software was not loaded, so I didn't bother.

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    Quote Originally Posted by moth View Post
    How far can you read before kicking your monitor to death??

    http://www.gormglaith.com/pdf/gormglaith.pdf

    I love epublishing

    As always, a critique would be nice
    you're Heidi? Well I never. Skimmed the 1st page of text getting increasingly quicker & then skipped straight to the end. 3 killer strikes from the Artwork, explanatory notes & a lexicon.

    Seeing as you asked, in my considered opinion, Yarbles.

    AI author gone bad-well you wouldn't want it to be any good would you? Remember Adolph Knipe's Golden Contract.

    How far did you get?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Editor View Post

    How far did you get?
    First para, and I read the 'glossary'

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    1 1/2 pages, that was fucking grim

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    I read the first page and decided it was fantasy porn and gave up.

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    Quote Originally Posted by moth View Post

    As always, a critique would be nice
    Good fucking grief.

    " Thorpe cabbage! " indeed.

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